Learning Outcome 4
In my peer review I try very hard to give good feedback. In this peers paper I made comments regarding organization, evidence, ideas, as well as suggesting solutions or changes. I don’t make a lot of local comments regarding punctuation and grammar. I enjoy giving the constructive feedback. However, I should work on adding in local comments in case peers are missing the small grammar mistakes I may cross. I need to balance my feedback so I can help my peers see the grammar mistakes they may not see. I try to give my comments length and context so the peer fully understands what I am suggesting. Over the course I have brought more of the ideas discussed in class to my peer review comments by saying things like “needs more I say” or “needs more they say.” I have definitely gone more in depth with peers papers over the course and tried to make my comments both positive and constructive.
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